Post by jlgalloway99 on Jul 10, 2017 10:56:04 GMT -8
Mission 1 The outline.
Part 1
Will focus on the DFS Phoenix back story, the introduction of Dom Martinez and Kourtney Helliwell.
The breakdown:
1. A General overview of the history and back story of the DFS Phoenix, talk a little about her last commanding officer, the Q like man known as Major Jim Olend, PHD.
2. Talk about the DFS Phoenix is dry dock and undergoing a major refit and overhaul.
3. Talk about how most of the crew of the Phoenix was arrested and they few that were not, where all re assigned to different assignment throughout the galactic federation.
4. Talk about Dom's feeling on getting his own command. He is very excited to be commanding a ship of his own. Talk about the struggles he went through.
4.1 His relationship with Sarah Gillman. From High to present.
4.2 The hard transition of keeping everyone at arms length and learning to let people in, talk about his struggle to allow people like Yuka into his personal life, and how to become a starship captain.
4.3 Talk about the war, talk about how Dom wants to save lives.
4.4 Talk about the new Mark VI prototype drones, being test piloted on the DFS Phoenix.
4.5 Talk about Dom trying to figure out a new command style.
5. Have a scene where Dom is leaving the DFS Lavie, either Captain Yuka Layton or another high ranking official beam over to the DFS Phoenix for the initial tour.
5.1 Dom and Yuka/other are given a tour of the Phoenix and some techno babble about the new layout, the ships role as a support vessel/patrol vessel. Talk about the Phoenix being a raider ship, a lot of firepower for quick responses, not a warship in the general term. She is a strike ship.
5.2 Dom is given a pad while on tour, its a layout of the ship, specs of the ship, crew rosters. Typical information a starship captain would need.
5.2.1 Dom did not know anyone on the roster personally, but a name stood out among the rest. Dom notices the name of Kourtney Helliwell. He remembered reading she started a brawl at the 602 Club at DFS Headquarters Command intentially. He remembered she was demoted for actions, he thought she got off a little to easy. If they were not at war, she would probably be serving jail time if not prison.
6. Scenes fades over to Kourtney, she is boarding the drydock facility and trying to make her way over to the DFS Phoenix, she notices a few personal are given her some glares. It was clear she was getting to much attention. She really wished everyone would stop starring. Others had started bar room fights over the years, so why was hers any different. She was a grieving widow.
6.1 Kourtney makes her way over to the airlock enterance, and checks in with the duty officer. She is given her room assignment and being told the Captain is on board and getting a tour, to make sure she stays clear of him.
6.2 Kourtney found that statement to be a little odd, but typical behavior. Since her arrest and demotion, people had acted strange around her. She thought it was also odd because according to the pad, her quarters were right next to the Captain's quarters. So how is going to avoid seeing him?
6.3 Kourtney was also not sure about the new captain. He advanced through the ranks pretty fast, he was very green in command. She heard he was a stickler about rules and regulations. She typically did not like stickler type of personalities.
7. Kourtney makes her way aboard the DFS Phoenix, a few of the roaming crew began to stare at her. It annoys her completely. She made her way to her quarters and started to unpack and settle in. Kourtney would not meet the Captain and the others till tomorrow at the command ceremony at 0800 hours.
7.1 She begins to unpack her belongings and she pulls out a picture of her deceased husband, she grabs the picture and begins to cry a little. Which makes her angry, she feels so vulnerable and weak and lost and lonely. She hates this feeling of grief.
7.2 A short time has passed, and Kourtney can barely make out a strange sound coming from her walls. It sounds like music, but music she has never heard before. Sh is curious about the sound, so she leaves her room. It was loud intentially. She noticed it was coming from the quarters of the Captain. The song was a little dark. She had never heard that song before.
7.3 She walked up to the edge of the Captain's quarters to get a better listen. His doors were open, was this intential, wondered Kourtney. She noticed a man motioning at her to enter the room. She noticed it was the new captain. He motioned for her to have a seat. she complied, mainly cause she was caught up on the lyrics of the song.
7.4 The song was "Worse day than yesterday" by flogging molly. Kourtney sat in a chair waiting for the song to end. Even though the lyrics were sad and depressing it brought a smile to her face, she could relate to the lyrics of the song.
8. After the song ends Dom and Kourtney begin to talk about her destructive path. Dom reminds her they have all lost during the war, they have all sacrificed a great deal for this war.
8.1 Dom tells Kourtney the sad reality of war, things she already knew, but needed to hear again.
8.2 He tells her, that Darius will pay for his crime, but Darius is not to blame for the loss of her husband, it's this damn aggressive nature of human society. He lightly preaches on the idea of a perfect utopian society. Kourtrney is not interested in utopian society, his focus is on Darius, she disagrees with the captain, he ordered the attack, he is the leader of the Faith Services Fleet, so in her eyes, he is to blame. And so is the ship that killed him the FSF Trinity.
8.3 Kourtney is a Teran not an earthling. She was raised Tera Nova 3, a hostile place full of corruption and greed. She made an oath to serve the military and the legitimate ruling body, but her allegiance to President Carian, was weak. She only supported her because she was the legitimate president of the galactic federation.
9. Dom talks about the need for change, otherwise we get caught in a vicious clycle pain that repeats over and over again. He tries to tell her that killing Darius and killing the Captain of the Trinity, will not bring any resolution. He explains, she needs to work through this and find closure. Kourtney agrees to try, but deep down she is not ready to forgive either man for taking the life of her husband.
10. Kourtney leaves the Captain's quarters and walks back into her quarters, thinking about what the Captain had said. There was a lot of truth to what he told her. She needed closure, and deep down she knew seeking revenge would not bring her husband back. She is not ready to let go, but at least now she is thinking about it.
Part 2
Will focus on the rest of the crew boarding the ship, they are both in line together. We will take a little back story journey on how they came to arrive on the DFS Phoenix.
The breakdown:
1. Ritoy was annoyed she was assigned to a small raider like ship. She was very happy with her last assignment aboard the DFS Comanche, which was sadly destroyed not to long ago. For the past few days, Ritoy was back on Risa, enjoying a little R&R from work.
1.1 Ritoy recalls flying around the main resort and getting a little peace and quiet, at first she thought that's what she needed but in reality what she needed was to be around people, not at war, but with people having fun, people smiling, people that left their emotional baggage at the counter and trying to relax, like she was trying to do.
2. Peyla Toran or as a lot of people call her Lieutenant Peyla, she is Bajorean and preferred to be called with rank and first name not rank and last name. Lt. Peyla was in line with another department head in a teal uniform. She noticed she was risian.
2.1 Peyla strikes up a conversation with Ritoy. The two began to talk about Risa, of all places and how Peyla has always wanted to go. Ritoy offers the next time the two of them are on shore leave, she would be happy to take her, Peyla says she is going to take her up on that offer.
3. The two of them talk all the way up to meeting the duty officer. They board the Phoenix and get assigned quarters. Both are on separate decks, which is not unusual.
4. Audlas is in quarters, lightly reference getting aboard the ship. Audlas is setting up her quarters, she hates how small they are. She is not sure if she will have room for all of her stuff.
4.1 Unlike most quarters, her desk was equipped with a security console desk, as Chief of Security, she could not afford to be without contact with her personal, no matter what time of night the incident was taking place.
4.2 Audlas started to unpack momento's from her home world Vrinat. It was a striving romulan colony. There is a lot of childhood memories she took with her, and they have managed to survive the destruction of the DFS Comanche, others were not so lucky.
5. Blish board the Phoenix, unlike his counter parts, he is very talkative, but he really never allows anyone to get to close, but he can talk your ear off. He just kept every conversation surface level, never went into any depth with anyone. He had already boarded, unpacked, and set himself up in the mess hall. He was the first person to arrive.
5.1 While he waited for others to arrive, he began to think about his last command on the Comanche was a low ranking engineering officer, after the death of most of the engineers on the Comanche, he now found himself the new chief engineer on the DFS Phoenix, most of the crew had been transferred to the Phoenix.
6. Dlanet like Blish had easily slipped aboard, he was mainly ignored, despite knowing most of the crew, he was the only suliban serving on this ship. His augmented jeans made some feel uncomfortable around him. He walked over to Blish, they both socialized a lot on the Comanche.
6.1 Dlanet talks about how some things never change. Blish and Dlanet both in the mess hall chatting it up.
7. Miyoka is the second to last pesron to board the DFS Pheonix, she had taken the last few days to spend time with her husband on Earth 1.
7.1 Miyoko's husband was going to stay behind and assist building the DFS Comanche, he was going to have to re crew her, the former crew was being re assigned to the DFS Phoenix. She was sad they were on different assignments. But she was a mili
7.2 Miyoko was very happy the crew was staying together, despite a lot new department heads, but she knew the new guys as well, most of the DFS Comanche crew were now serving on the DFS Phoenix. She was not sure if the captain was the right call. She felt that she should have been given command of the Phoenix crew. He was not qualified to command, but she was stuck with him.
8.0 V'Lur was the last of the senior staff to board she also the longest to get back from Vulcan. V'Lur went to see her family.
8.1 Vlur did not waste any time unpacking her gear, she placed it in her quarters. She instead was hungry and wanted to get some food in the mess hall.
8.2 V'Lur replicated a plate of food and noticed Blish and Dlanet talking. She joined them. They were all talking about transferring to this smaller and faster vessel. Dlanet could not wait to test out the engines at full velocity.
9. Audlas leaves her quarters she has no doubt most of the senior staff found their way to the mess hall, a lot of the staff were already some what close, she knew it would be inpolite of her not to show up!
9.1 Audlas joins the group, they wonder if Kourtney will meet up with them. They are pretty sure the new Captain will not meet up with them, and they are pretty sure the Miyoko will met up with them as well.
9.2 Miyoko meets up with them in the mess hall. They talk about the crew staying together.
10. Dom started to read the files on the crew, he noticed the senior staff always seemed to have lunch together, he debated if he should go? He was new to this group. He was there CO not there friend. He had a feeling that Kourtney was going to show up.
10.1 Dom tells Kourtney they are going to the mess hall to meet the staff, for Dom this would be an informal visit, for Kourtney it would be a chance to start over again.
10.2 Kourtney and Dom walk into the mess and join the others, they chat for a bit about and get to know their new captain a litte. Everyone was surprised he joined them.
Part 1
Will focus on the DFS Phoenix back story, the introduction of Dom Martinez and Kourtney Helliwell.
The breakdown:
1. A General overview of the history and back story of the DFS Phoenix, talk a little about her last commanding officer, the Q like man known as Major Jim Olend, PHD.
2. Talk about the DFS Phoenix is dry dock and undergoing a major refit and overhaul.
3. Talk about how most of the crew of the Phoenix was arrested and they few that were not, where all re assigned to different assignment throughout the galactic federation.
4. Talk about Dom's feeling on getting his own command. He is very excited to be commanding a ship of his own. Talk about the struggles he went through.
4.1 His relationship with Sarah Gillman. From High to present.
4.2 The hard transition of keeping everyone at arms length and learning to let people in, talk about his struggle to allow people like Yuka into his personal life, and how to become a starship captain.
4.3 Talk about the war, talk about how Dom wants to save lives.
4.4 Talk about the new Mark VI prototype drones, being test piloted on the DFS Phoenix.
4.5 Talk about Dom trying to figure out a new command style.
5. Have a scene where Dom is leaving the DFS Lavie, either Captain Yuka Layton or another high ranking official beam over to the DFS Phoenix for the initial tour.
5.1 Dom and Yuka/other are given a tour of the Phoenix and some techno babble about the new layout, the ships role as a support vessel/patrol vessel. Talk about the Phoenix being a raider ship, a lot of firepower for quick responses, not a warship in the general term. She is a strike ship.
5.2 Dom is given a pad while on tour, its a layout of the ship, specs of the ship, crew rosters. Typical information a starship captain would need.
5.2.1 Dom did not know anyone on the roster personally, but a name stood out among the rest. Dom notices the name of Kourtney Helliwell. He remembered reading she started a brawl at the 602 Club at DFS Headquarters Command intentially. He remembered she was demoted for actions, he thought she got off a little to easy. If they were not at war, she would probably be serving jail time if not prison.
6. Scenes fades over to Kourtney, she is boarding the drydock facility and trying to make her way over to the DFS Phoenix, she notices a few personal are given her some glares. It was clear she was getting to much attention. She really wished everyone would stop starring. Others had started bar room fights over the years, so why was hers any different. She was a grieving widow.
6.1 Kourtney makes her way over to the airlock enterance, and checks in with the duty officer. She is given her room assignment and being told the Captain is on board and getting a tour, to make sure she stays clear of him.
6.2 Kourtney found that statement to be a little odd, but typical behavior. Since her arrest and demotion, people had acted strange around her. She thought it was also odd because according to the pad, her quarters were right next to the Captain's quarters. So how is going to avoid seeing him?
6.3 Kourtney was also not sure about the new captain. He advanced through the ranks pretty fast, he was very green in command. She heard he was a stickler about rules and regulations. She typically did not like stickler type of personalities.
7. Kourtney makes her way aboard the DFS Phoenix, a few of the roaming crew began to stare at her. It annoys her completely. She made her way to her quarters and started to unpack and settle in. Kourtney would not meet the Captain and the others till tomorrow at the command ceremony at 0800 hours.
7.1 She begins to unpack her belongings and she pulls out a picture of her deceased husband, she grabs the picture and begins to cry a little. Which makes her angry, she feels so vulnerable and weak and lost and lonely. She hates this feeling of grief.
7.2 A short time has passed, and Kourtney can barely make out a strange sound coming from her walls. It sounds like music, but music she has never heard before. Sh is curious about the sound, so she leaves her room. It was loud intentially. She noticed it was coming from the quarters of the Captain. The song was a little dark. She had never heard that song before.
7.3 She walked up to the edge of the Captain's quarters to get a better listen. His doors were open, was this intential, wondered Kourtney. She noticed a man motioning at her to enter the room. She noticed it was the new captain. He motioned for her to have a seat. she complied, mainly cause she was caught up on the lyrics of the song.
7.4 The song was "Worse day than yesterday" by flogging molly. Kourtney sat in a chair waiting for the song to end. Even though the lyrics were sad and depressing it brought a smile to her face, she could relate to the lyrics of the song.
8. After the song ends Dom and Kourtney begin to talk about her destructive path. Dom reminds her they have all lost during the war, they have all sacrificed a great deal for this war.
8.1 Dom tells Kourtney the sad reality of war, things she already knew, but needed to hear again.
8.2 He tells her, that Darius will pay for his crime, but Darius is not to blame for the loss of her husband, it's this damn aggressive nature of human society. He lightly preaches on the idea of a perfect utopian society. Kourtrney is not interested in utopian society, his focus is on Darius, she disagrees with the captain, he ordered the attack, he is the leader of the Faith Services Fleet, so in her eyes, he is to blame. And so is the ship that killed him the FSF Trinity.
8.3 Kourtney is a Teran not an earthling. She was raised Tera Nova 3, a hostile place full of corruption and greed. She made an oath to serve the military and the legitimate ruling body, but her allegiance to President Carian, was weak. She only supported her because she was the legitimate president of the galactic federation.
9. Dom talks about the need for change, otherwise we get caught in a vicious clycle pain that repeats over and over again. He tries to tell her that killing Darius and killing the Captain of the Trinity, will not bring any resolution. He explains, she needs to work through this and find closure. Kourtney agrees to try, but deep down she is not ready to forgive either man for taking the life of her husband.
10. Kourtney leaves the Captain's quarters and walks back into her quarters, thinking about what the Captain had said. There was a lot of truth to what he told her. She needed closure, and deep down she knew seeking revenge would not bring her husband back. She is not ready to let go, but at least now she is thinking about it.
Part 2
Will focus on the rest of the crew boarding the ship, they are both in line together. We will take a little back story journey on how they came to arrive on the DFS Phoenix.
The breakdown:
1. Ritoy was annoyed she was assigned to a small raider like ship. She was very happy with her last assignment aboard the DFS Comanche, which was sadly destroyed not to long ago. For the past few days, Ritoy was back on Risa, enjoying a little R&R from work.
1.1 Ritoy recalls flying around the main resort and getting a little peace and quiet, at first she thought that's what she needed but in reality what she needed was to be around people, not at war, but with people having fun, people smiling, people that left their emotional baggage at the counter and trying to relax, like she was trying to do.
2. Peyla Toran or as a lot of people call her Lieutenant Peyla, she is Bajorean and preferred to be called with rank and first name not rank and last name. Lt. Peyla was in line with another department head in a teal uniform. She noticed she was risian.
2.1 Peyla strikes up a conversation with Ritoy. The two began to talk about Risa, of all places and how Peyla has always wanted to go. Ritoy offers the next time the two of them are on shore leave, she would be happy to take her, Peyla says she is going to take her up on that offer.
3. The two of them talk all the way up to meeting the duty officer. They board the Phoenix and get assigned quarters. Both are on separate decks, which is not unusual.
4. Audlas is in quarters, lightly reference getting aboard the ship. Audlas is setting up her quarters, she hates how small they are. She is not sure if she will have room for all of her stuff.
4.1 Unlike most quarters, her desk was equipped with a security console desk, as Chief of Security, she could not afford to be without contact with her personal, no matter what time of night the incident was taking place.
4.2 Audlas started to unpack momento's from her home world Vrinat. It was a striving romulan colony. There is a lot of childhood memories she took with her, and they have managed to survive the destruction of the DFS Comanche, others were not so lucky.
5. Blish board the Phoenix, unlike his counter parts, he is very talkative, but he really never allows anyone to get to close, but he can talk your ear off. He just kept every conversation surface level, never went into any depth with anyone. He had already boarded, unpacked, and set himself up in the mess hall. He was the first person to arrive.
5.1 While he waited for others to arrive, he began to think about his last command on the Comanche was a low ranking engineering officer, after the death of most of the engineers on the Comanche, he now found himself the new chief engineer on the DFS Phoenix, most of the crew had been transferred to the Phoenix.
6. Dlanet like Blish had easily slipped aboard, he was mainly ignored, despite knowing most of the crew, he was the only suliban serving on this ship. His augmented jeans made some feel uncomfortable around him. He walked over to Blish, they both socialized a lot on the Comanche.
6.1 Dlanet talks about how some things never change. Blish and Dlanet both in the mess hall chatting it up.
7. Miyoka is the second to last pesron to board the DFS Pheonix, she had taken the last few days to spend time with her husband on Earth 1.
7.1 Miyoko's husband was going to stay behind and assist building the DFS Comanche, he was going to have to re crew her, the former crew was being re assigned to the DFS Phoenix. She was sad they were on different assignments. But she was a mili
7.2 Miyoko was very happy the crew was staying together, despite a lot new department heads, but she knew the new guys as well, most of the DFS Comanche crew were now serving on the DFS Phoenix. She was not sure if the captain was the right call. She felt that she should have been given command of the Phoenix crew. He was not qualified to command, but she was stuck with him.
8.0 V'Lur was the last of the senior staff to board she also the longest to get back from Vulcan. V'Lur went to see her family.
8.1 Vlur did not waste any time unpacking her gear, she placed it in her quarters. She instead was hungry and wanted to get some food in the mess hall.
8.2 V'Lur replicated a plate of food and noticed Blish and Dlanet talking. She joined them. They were all talking about transferring to this smaller and faster vessel. Dlanet could not wait to test out the engines at full velocity.
9. Audlas leaves her quarters she has no doubt most of the senior staff found their way to the mess hall, a lot of the staff were already some what close, she knew it would be inpolite of her not to show up!
9.1 Audlas joins the group, they wonder if Kourtney will meet up with them. They are pretty sure the new Captain will not meet up with them, and they are pretty sure the Miyoko will met up with them as well.
9.2 Miyoko meets up with them in the mess hall. They talk about the crew staying together.
10. Dom started to read the files on the crew, he noticed the senior staff always seemed to have lunch together, he debated if he should go? He was new to this group. He was there CO not there friend. He had a feeling that Kourtney was going to show up.
10.1 Dom tells Kourtney they are going to the mess hall to meet the staff, for Dom this would be an informal visit, for Kourtney it would be a chance to start over again.
10.2 Kourtney and Dom walk into the mess and join the others, they chat for a bit about and get to know their new captain a litte. Everyone was surprised he joined them.